高考英语复习书面表达复习10旅游类话题指导.doc

专题10 旅游类话题指导
实例指导1---罗马旅游
【写作任务】
【写作指导】
1．仔细审题，确定表达信息。
本文属于日记类应用文写作。文章要求叙述旅游观光的行程，描述各景点内容，可以按照行程以及参观景点的先后顺序展开写作。另外，本写作要用第一人称，时态以过去时态为主。
日记应主要包括如下要点：1）旅行方式以及旅游地点一一罗马，并对其进行整体介绍；2)参观的三个景点的描述一一国立博物馆、凯旋门、圆形竞技场等；3)表达自己的感受和计划。
2．选词组句，表达信息。
写作过程中可以参考如下词汇和句式结构：
1)信息表达词汇。如：描述景点的词语：beautiful，precious；a symbol of，be well known for，splendid，be worth等；表达游人感受的词语：be attracted by , be struck by，prefer to，I really think等；客观描述地理事物的词语：be situated in the middle ; a long history等。
2)向式结构。为使用有限的文字描述美丽的景点，也为了提高表达的质量，写作过程中要尽量多地使用复杂的句式结构，如：
1. 用含有时间状语从句的复合句表达“抵达地点以及感受”：I was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment we arrived the there at 7 o’clock in the morning by plane．
2. 用过去分词短语作状语，表达地点，并用定语从句补充说明其悠久的历史：Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula , Rome is well known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history of 2，500 years．
用定语从句补充说明参观景点后的感受和收获：In the morning we visited' Museo Nazionale Romano, where I enjoyed many precious and beautiful had a chance to visit the symbol of Rome, Colosseo, which is very beautiful in the setting 。
3)篇章结构中的过渡与衔接词语。如：therefore，first ，then , finally , but等。
【学生****作】
May 1 st Friday Sunny
Today I paid a visit to one of the oldest cities in Europe, Rome in Italy. I was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment we arrived here at 7 o'clock in the morning by plane. Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula, Rome is well known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history of years. Therefore, many tourists from all over the world would prefer to spend their holiday here, espeically in warm spring.
In the morning we visited Museo Nazionale Romano, where I enjoyed many precious and beautiful sculptures. Then we went to enjoy the splendid building of Triumphal Arch in the afternoon. Nearly at dark, we had a chance to visit the symbol of Rome, Colosseo,. ①that is very be