浦东新王牌高三英语作文讲解.pdf

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第一节开头
偏离主题是写作中的大忌，也是最大的败笔。因此，文章伊始就要注意掌稳，不
能偏离航道。前面谈到的审题和打腹稿就是有效避免此类错误的重要法宝。此外
，掌握下列原则也是使文章主题鲜明、中心突出的可靠保障。
英国博物学家John Ray有句名言：Well begun is half
。做事如此，写作又何尝不是如此？中文文章讲究的
是凤头、猪肚和豹尾，强调文章的开篇要有神采，要引人人胜；结尾要有力度，能
画龙睛，耐人寻味。英文文章也不例外。一篇开宗明义、立意新颖的文章，定会激
发阅读者的兴奋点，使之为之一震。下面的开篇“法宝”会助你旗开得胜，马到成
功。
一、开头的原则
英文式的思考方式属于垂直模式，其特点是决不拐弯抹角，有话统统和托出。这
种思维模式突出地体现在英文独特的行文方式上。
1．开篇点题
例1 Topic: The iPad
Opening: The iPad is one of the most welcome and popular electronic devices ever
invented. It is not only esteemed by teachers, research workers, administrators, but
also by many students.
例2 Topic: The Two-day Weekend
Opening: Since the carrying out of the two-day weekend, college students ave
benefited a lot from it. First. .
点评：用主题句点明主题，而且one of the most welcome and popular ectronic
devices和not only.. but also，．，使文章开门见山，引人人胜。
假如文章这样开头：The iPad is an electronic device ever
invented．是否如同一杯白开水平淡而无味了呢？
2．易于展开
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例 1 Topic: My View on Opporturuty
Opening: Different people have different opinions as to the view of opportunity.
Some people argue that.
例 2 Topic: Why I Want to Go to College?
Opening: There are several reasons why I want to go to college. First all,…
[点评]：例1中的两个different为下文的展开提供了广阔的空间，作者此有了很大
的自由度。先提出别人的观点，再表明自己的态