writing非谓语动词在写作中的应用.ppt

The beauty of writing
“Reading makes a full man;
conference a ready man;
and writing an ______man.”
--Francis Bacon
exact
阅读使人充实,交谈使人机智,写作使人精确。
--培根
阅卷老师喜欢的句子
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同位语结构、with复合结构,使文章简洁、通顺;尽量使用动词短语和词组、定语从句等复合句,修辞润色文章。
使用分词短语(非谓语动词)
Non- finite Verbs
in writing
非谓语动词在写作中的应用
1. Seeing from the top of mountain, the
city is beautiful .

2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an
enjoyable thing.

3. —Which team is good at cooking?
—A team called itself the supper cook.
Correction
写作中非谓语动词常见的错误
Seen
climbing
calling
1. When she heard the news, she burst into crying.
_________ the news, she burst into crying.
2. Australia is located on the west coast of the Pacific. Australia is the largest country in Oceania.
Australia, ________ __________ the west
coast of the Pacific, is the largest country in
Oceania.
用非谓语结构改写句子
Hearing
located on
3. Though I admit what he has said, I still doubt he didn’t do his best.
__________ ________ ________ _______
_________, I still doubt he didn’t do his best.
4. Because I missed the bus, I went to school
late.
________ ________ __________, I went to school late.
Admitting what he has
said
Missing the bus
I was walking in the street , I saw him.
_____________ in the street , I saw him.
you work hard,
________________hard , you will eed.
Walking
Working
he had failed many times , he didn’t lose heart.
________________many times , he didn’t lose heart.
she was scolded by the teacher, the girl sat there without lifting her head.
_____________________ ,the girl sat there without lifting her head.
Having failed
Scolded by the teacher
例文(1):
Getting back what you have lost would be an ettable experience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscribed(刻). Fortunately, it was returned.
That morning, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. On arriving at school, I headed to my classroom