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“感到害怕”的细节描述例子一:当看到那只凶恶的狼时,我感到很害怕。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述,先将意思表达清楚。__________________________________2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。:,)Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.(嗓子发紧,膝盖发软)2)Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.(吓呆了,不敢动弹)3)Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating.(被深深地恐惧感所控制,手心出汗)2“感到兴奋”的细节描述当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋极了。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述,先将意思表达清楚。_____________________________________2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1____________________________________2____________________________________3____________________________________3参考答案:,)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.(激动得两眼放光)2)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,herheartwasthumpingwithexcitement.(激动得心砰砰跳)3)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awideexcitementtookholdofher.(兴奋不能自已)4“感到悲伤”的细节描述一听到那个坏消息,她悲伤不已。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述,先将意思表达清楚。_____________________________________2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1____________________________________2____________________________________3____________________________________5参考答案:,)Uponhearingthebadnews,herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.(心痛,眼泪直流)2)Uponhearingthebadnews,she,numbwithgrief,hadtroublespeaking.(悲伤到失去知觉,不能开口说话)3)Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn ’thelpcryinbitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制,忍不住哭泣 )6“感到开心”的细节描述当妈妈亲吻他时,小 baby开心极了。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述,先将意思表达清楚。_____________________________________2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1____________________________________2____________________________________3____________________________________7参考答案:kissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/)Whenhismotherkissedhimonthechee